Some people say that economic growth is the only way to end world poverty and hunger. Others say that economic growth is damaging the environment and should stop. Discuss bọth views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, many people argue that economic development is the best solution to overcome world poverty and hunger while the others believe that economic growth lead to the destruction of the habitats and it would be better if it is end. This essay will discuss both these views but personally, I am convinced that the development of economic is the suitable way to escape from the poor situation and preventing the lack of food all over the world.
On the one hand, there are various of reasons why damaging the environment caused of economic growth. The first and the most noticeable reason is the decrease in of forest and tree in order to make way for urban area and industrialization. In fact, the world population soars dramatically so that we need more space to constructed accommodation for residents or setting up more factories to serve the manufacturing of many felids. As a result, the forest is threaten by human and could be disappear. In addition, another negative effect is environments pollution. The development of economic may raises the standard life of human, thus many precious resources are damaged by the daily activities. For instance, the traffic congestion in downtown may release tons of CO2 while, the water and soil is poisoned by chemical from many productions which are used by citizens.
On the other hand, despite of those above arguments, economic growth gains many benefits to human. first of all, economic development helps people escape poverty . Take viet nam as an pride example. 40 years ago, viet nam was a poor country with almost of population was live in poor conditions and lack of many materials like food, clothing and transportation to name but a few and moreover, many people couldn’t access the internet, electricity or clean water. By contrast, at the moment, due to the development of economic, viet nam become a modern and attractive places for not only tourist but also business man all over the world. Furthermore, economic growth may force the agricultural be upgraded and contributed to reduce hunger. if a nation have an strong economic they will able to pay for their residents food or equipment and technical to develop the agricultural. Absolutely, the civilian will escape form the hunger .
In conclusion, although economic growth has some demerits to the inhabitants but it is the fastest and easiest measurement to overcome poverty and hunger. In my point of view, I am convinced that, we need to concentrate to develop the economic and protecting the natural environments to ensure the balance of our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, thus, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2156.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04918032787 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93003005983 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555035128806 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 694.8 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7359148642 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.473684211 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4736842105 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280603465079 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869243277264 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798591713797 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188465459673 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595765575286 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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