Some people say job satisfaction is more important than job security, others think people cannot always enjoy their jobs, so having a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
A question has been raised over whether a pleasure job in comparison with a stability job is more important. Generally people think that they prefer having a fixed job to finding what they like. From my personal perspective, I do believe that having the right to follow our dream is more necessary out of a boring permanent job.
The widespread belief is that doing a job for a long time can secure their life more effectively than a satisfaction job. It is a globalization that due to the incredible development of technology, manual and intellectual labors can be replaced by automated systems feasibly. In that case, people are bound to compete not only in person but also with modern technology. On that basis, once people get a job, they will try their best to maintain that position, where they earn for living and satisfy fundamental needs . As long as people are still working, though they do not get into their job, they can prevent themselves from being unemployed, failure and poverty.
As far as I am concerned, however, chasing our dream job means a lot to some people's lives rather than digging themselves into a tired job security. It is obvious that people will be a burden whenever they wake up in the morning and have no motivation to start a working day when they are stuck with a boring job and the opposite was the case for that enjoyable one. Though it might take time for us to recognize what we are interested in, we are in the mood to accomplish tasks successfully. Even if we fall down, we are encouraged enough to stand up again. As we can see from well-known businessmen such as Steve Jobs or Mark Zuckerberg, they dropped out of Harvard University, which can give them a stable wonderful job in the future, and started their dream career path, which succeeded after hundred times of loss.
In conclusion, it comes down to people’s demand, whether they need a job to make sure of their life or to fulfill their own ambition. As for me, a job that can permit me to create everything I dreamed about is much more meaningful than having a repeated-everyday job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, still, well, as for, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 370.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67297297297 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38581623665 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7409099023 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575675675676 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0538226101 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.266666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6666666667 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.73333333333 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.373411609057 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139485277944 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0920037263468 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26545716404 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0475563919279 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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