Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion
It is thought that thanks to the advances in technology, shoppers tend to buy products much more easily while some people believe have an opposite idea. My view is that shopping in the modern life is convenient, I argue that there are several drawbacks of this trend.
On the one hand, online shopping and paying through the state-of-art technologies bring a wide of benefits for buyers, which is not only time-consuming but also handy. In terms of opting for the products online, there are many options for consumers who can compare the quality through the reviews of any goods. For instance, e-commerce sites such as Shopee, Tiki or Sendo in Vietnam have gained the popularity among youngsters or new married couples because these sites allow them to choose the most appropriate stuffs by reading the products’ evaluation. Furthermore, apart from paying by conventional, numerous supermarkets encourage people to pay the bills by smart card or use the self-service checkouts. In Japan, traditional stores have been superseded by automatic payment ones where shoppers are able to purchase any product without the assistance of staff.
On the other hand, I believe that albeit the disappearance of many traditional ways of life, some old shopping habits have not died out. Firstly, many old generations hardly get accustomed to ordering the products online as they do not trust in the mass marketing. For example, to ensure the high-quality goods, senior adults would rather to visit the physical stores to choose what they are seeking for. Secondly, there are some products that cannot buy online such as clothes. While the images or measure three rounds are provided, many shoppers prefer to try on clothes in order to consider to fit them or not.
In conclusion, although both views certainly have some validity, it seems to me that it is better to go to the store to browse the most suitable product.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 586, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[3]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'consider fitting'.
Suggestion: consider fitting
...rs prefer to try on clothes in order to consider to fit them or not. In conclusion, althoug...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1602.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06962025316 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73271174979 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617088607595 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.879461419 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.230769231 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3076923077 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7692307692 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118246158382 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04327920041 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427509529616 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0861040929203 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433874217655 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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