Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel or to work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern society, integration has become one of the most popular trends and it exerts a huge impact on our daily lives in all aspects. Therefore, being able to use a foreign language is of great necessity, since it would enable them to work or study in another country. As a consequence, many people think this is the only reason why we should learn a foreign language, while others think the opposite. This essay will look into both sides of the argument and finally point out why I side with the latter.
To begin with, there is no doubt that studying or working abroad has been the main motivation which urges many people to learn a new language, especially English. In simpler terms, the mastery of such language ensures the ability to communicate and interact with other people in that country, and as a result, lead to a better working or studying experience. Should anyone be unable to talk that foreign language, they would be completely isolated and the precious opportunity will be totally wasted. What is more, people who are bilingual are also likely to achieve better results in their life, since they can learn more from a wide range of materials on the Internet, even though they are written in another language.
On the other hand, there are many other purposes that people learn a foreign language for. To many learners, it is because they want to explore and get to know more about the culture and language of a specific country. Take English for example, many people don't have the chance to settle in the UK or America, but it is still the most popular language with billions of learners. This is because they want to understand the Western culture better, or simply, to understand the lyrics of a favorite song. What is more, learning a foreign language helps you broaden your horizons and expand your circle of friends. People will be able to make new friends all over the world, and discuss things which they never happen to experience before in their life.
To sum up, although many people decide to learn a foreign language for the purpose of personal development, I hold the belief that there are still many other reasons why we should do so, especially when it comes to finding out more about the outer world. Consequently, learning a foreign language is likely to be of great importance to anyone in this modern world, not only those who will move to work or study in another country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
.... Take English for example, many people dont have the chance to settle in the UK or ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, if, look, so, still, therefore, while, for example, no doubt, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71058823529 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4059326904 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498823529412 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.0438294373 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.125 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5625 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.375 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310427264966 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11272936966 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986065398145 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21201059692 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582312345139 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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