Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that adopting an overseas language in order to travel or work in a foreign country is sole purpose.However,others believe that not only these but also enormous reason behind learning new language.I totally agree with this statement.
To begin with, a great number of individuals said that in order to work or travel in overseas,knowing a foreign language is mandatory for every immigrants.Hence,this is due to the fact that without learning this particular overseas language it is quite impossible to communicate with the native citizens.Moreover,knowing a new language is becoming more and more popular across the globe.By this what i mean that if a person know a new language, he or she will be able to know others thought as well as their tradition and customs.Furthermore, this approach mitigating the obstacles among countries and opining the border in order to explore each other nation.
On the other hand, a few individuals claimed that these are not only the reasons rather plenty of factors behind this approach.Despite knowing a language, if a person go to a foreign country, he or she might have the plan to not come back in homes that is why they profoundly adopt a foreign language in order to embark there.In that case,they do not take it as seriously as previous one.
In my perspective, knowing a new language is a great weapon for immigrants while travelling or working worldwide in order communicate with local inhabitants.Thus,this is a significant method of exploring each other culture and system and it makes us globally united over conflicts.
To sum up, both statement have distinguish opinion in terms of adopting overseas language.Although it has certain opponent thoughts on this approach,all in all have immense effect in positive notes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, i mean, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17931034483 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.6358042484 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565517241379 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 58.0 20.2975951904 286% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.758489918 49.4020404114 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.4 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 58.0 20.7667163134 279% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 28.0 7.06120827912 397% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278543362521 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156315458139 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984827823131 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156315458139 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984827823131 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.0 13.0946893788 244% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.61 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.9 11.3001002004 229% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.2 10.1190380762 249% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.7795591182 241% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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