Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foregin country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Although some individuals say that learning a foreign language is reasonable only if it is in order to travel or to work abroad, I would argue that these are not the only benefits of learning a foreign language for someone.
Studying a new language would make you more communicative with other cultures. For example, you need to watch movies or read books of different nations while you are learning their language, and it would make you more familiar with their culture and lifestyle. Making a progress in learning a language also could make you feel more productive and pleased about yourself and it would boost your self-confidence. For instance, imagine in a company of friends you are the only person who is able to speak in a language other than their mother tongue.
According to others a foreign language is only needed for traveling or working in another country, I would say it is totally wrong. Because nowadays there are many tools such as mobile phone apps that can help you to meet your basic needs of a foreign language like travel conversations. However I think for working in another country, it is better for everyone to be able to communicate in their mother tongue, but it is not sufficient, you also need to know their cultural habits. The other thing is that many developed countries today are speaking in English, so it is not that necessary.
To conclude, I restate that learning a foreign language has more benefits than just being used for traveling or working abroad. It could make you a more communicative and confident person.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 139, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to second'
Suggestion: to second
...s, there are also some people who learn second languages as part of their curiosity. I...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, nonetheless, second, so, well, while, as to, for example, in summary, no doubt, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85409252669 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60372273775 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544483985765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.6079905932 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6153846154 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36186523562 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146636360665 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.13481143737 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260333621628 0.151304729494 172% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113243308697 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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