Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
These days, number of people who want to study foreign languages are increasing every time due to globalization process. Some people think that the only way to improve language skills are going to travel or work in abroad. However, others believe that it is not only way to increase quality of language skills. In this essay I will discuss about these views and give my own opinion.
To begin with, studying foreign languages in abroad more effective than learning languages at your motherland. Because in abroad you should not speak in your mother tongue and you must speak in language which is common for most people. Therefore, people adapt to language and became to speak at this tongue after few time. According to statistics, people who start to learn language in abroad achieve best results than who begin to study at their country.
On the other hand, there are some drawbacks. Not everyone have opportunity to go to are foreign country ought to financial situation. Going to abroad for learning another language requires people to spend a great amount of money, which is very hard for many people. People who are very ambitious, but if they do not have enough money, can learn language through self-study which is may be very effective and cheaper. For example, for travelling to foreign country as a language learner you need to spend at least 1000 dollar, while self-study requires only hard-working and plan to achieve your goal. However, it requires long time.
To sum up, I think these both views are very effective. If you came to abroad for travelling and learning a language means that you need to be into this language. Also, if you have qualified materials, it still perhaps to speak an another language.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 419, Rule ID: IN_WHO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'whom'?
Suggestion: whom
...age in abroad achieve best results than who begin to study at their country. On th...
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Line 3, column 518, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'dollar' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'dollars'.
Suggestion: dollars
...learner you need to spend at least 1000 dollar, while self-study requires only hard-wo...
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Line 4, column 228, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'a language' or 'another language'.
Suggestion: a language; another language
...ed materials, it still perhaps to speak an another language.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, at least, for example, i think, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87414965986 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47347210061 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52380952381 0.561755894193 93% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5601939038 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.2941176471 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2941176471 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.82352941176 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324630965069 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104281282133 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0536067875927 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201509669711 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596955989759 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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