Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

Essay topics:

Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language

learning language is essential in the globalization era. It is not denied that people always want to travel either for business matter or only for pleasure.
Some say that learning language is a must only for those who want to go abroad or work there. It is very impossible that they do not need to learn language. They should understand the language of the country where they work. It is so funny to see a worker cannot master the language. If this happens, surely they will need others’ help to translate or interpret the words of other workers.
On the other hand, others say that language is very important to be learnt for various reasons. Foreign language is not only spoken in the place where it is native at. People can still use the language even they are not abroad. In this era, it is a good opportunity to have as many foreign languages as possible. Mastering various languages enables someone to have opportunities to work in a foreigner’s companies or to teach it in a course or even to be guide in tourism spots. Therefore, people with the mindset that language is not only used to be applied in the native country will take it as a great challenge.
To sum up, learning language is not something very new in this global time. It can be said that it is a must. Foreign language is not only used for the workers working abroad or for the travellers having trips overseas. It is a exciting challenge for those who wish for change.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, to sum up, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1197.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56870229008 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62483610583 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492366412214 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 382.5 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7772180144 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.4117647059 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4117647059 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.17647058824 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42311400358 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132487830545 0.084324248473 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.088742883289 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.258654569852 0.151304729494 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415589482825 0.056905535591 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.93 12.4159519038 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.97 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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