Some people store personal and private information online, including banking, contacts and addresses. Is it a positive or negative trend?
It is true that there is an increasing number of people who back up the privacy-related information on the Internet. Personally, I believe this trend is both positive and negative.
On the one hand, saving private information , namely banking, contacts on the Internet is advantageous to a certain extent. In fact, in today's fast-paced life, people have performed different tasks on a daily basis which consist of a bunch of significant information. Therefore, they stand a better chance of flexibly finding expected documents without confusion owing to the capacity of storing all relevant data on the Internet. One good illustration of this is when an employee has to perform a transaction through an automatic trading spot, only by opening his handset device and extracting passwords can he simply withdraw or send money.
On the other hand, despite the aforementioned benefits, this trend also contributes to some detrimental effects . A major drawback is that their personal information is easily invaded by Internet hackers and virus distributions. In fact, given the information citizens enter into different sources of the Internet containing money or possession-related reports, cybercriminals tend to infiltrate to take advantage of this to seek profit and in extreme cases, have a bad motive to penetrate the private life of each user. A particularly good example of this is that according to the 2014 survey of Japan, a female fan broke into her male idol’s apartment in the night with the help of the address that she found after he had shared his bank account through a social networking site.
In conclusion, while there are some positive aspects of storing personal and private information online, it is evident that the negative impacts of online information storage outweigh the benefits. Given the situation, I believe that it is of paramount importance to memorize those kinds of data.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, in fact, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27213114754 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08937005967 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619672131148 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2203812197 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4166666667 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.08333333333 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274418161947 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873379476478 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0958628378173 0.0667982634062 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162268521714 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080150433004 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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