Some people think that big companies should provide sports and social facilities for the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Opinions differ as to whether associations ought to sustain sport and social facilities for the local communities. Personally, I agree with this point of view and this essay will discuss it in detail.
On the one hand, the sport has great value for any country. It is an enjoyable and effective way to improve both physical and mental health. In addition, it can relieve stress levels, raise fitness, and prevent the development of diseases such as heart disease and blood pressure. This will also create a healthier environment in the community and become a source of motivation.
On the other hand, companies that provide sports and social facilities for local communities can be recognized more by local people. The organizations which support facilities about sports clubs, healthcare become more well-known for the population who are going to use these services. For instance, this is the best way to promote company brands and their products to communities. In addition, it is a method to increase brand loyalty and reduce the cost of marketing.
In conclusion, providing a better facility to the community brings companies a lot of benefits. Not only the companies but also everyone can get these advantages.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHETHER[6]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "as to"?
Suggestion: whether
Opinions differ as to whether associations ought to sustain sport and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, as to, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 198.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87082453431 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5906334751 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.25 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263619574929 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903884240323 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0967713892003 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153085833881 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0652774950079 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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