Some people think the cheap air flight gives ordinary people more freedom. However, others think the cheap air flight should be banned because it pollutes the air and brings many other problems.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this day and age, Affordable air flights are favoured by the public, especially the middle-class.While somes think that cheap air flight should be banned due to its negative environmental impact, I agree with the other idea that inexpensive air flight brings people an uncompetitive experience.
There are several reasons why some people think the state should ban the service of cheap air flight. First of all, it affects the atmosphere negatively. Because of the low price of plane tickets, plane companies have to diminish the capital expenditure, so the low cost fuels, which are used to run the plane, are usually considered the prior choice. As a result, these cheap fuels could release a massive amount of polluted ash, which could run the air. In addition, if the demand for cheap airplanes grows rapidly, there could be more and more planes manufactured. Admittedly, the facilities made from plastic of those planes could not decompose, therefore, could have a negative impact on the environment, especially the soil.
On the other hand, I still believe that it is more beneficial for us to continue using cheap air flight. To begin with, Cheap air flights bring to people a large number of international visitors, the key factor contributing to national income. Many visitors do not want to spend a lot of money on the plane ticket, therefore, they could use that amount of money on their journey. If cheap air flights are banned, some countries could lose numerous prospective visitors. Secondly, some people said that cheap air flight provides them special experience. In some particular views, people think that attending a cheap flight makes them feel a sense of freedom. For instance, people could meet attendances from different classes, not only high-class. Being treated equally like everyone makes them comfortable, therefore, the satisfaction is enhanced.
In conclusion, although cheap air flights still have some disadvantages, the government should not ban this kind of transport due to several reasons mentioned above.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1727.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26524390244 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86050194393 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564024390244 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.2991105059 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.9375 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8125 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441960223186 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15586380667 0.084324248473 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131463934644 0.0667982634062 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.289915623568 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0979743186354 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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