Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about the dress code. Some of them support the idea that gives a higher priority to the outcome of the work rather than following the regulations of the uniform. I believe that employees at some sectors should wear what they like, however in certain places, the uniform should be strictly followed.
Many employers do not connect between the performance of their employees and their clothes. They care more about the results of their work. If we look at huge technological companies like Google and Facebook, we will find that their staff wears casual clothes. They do not have a specific uniform. The managers in these companies believe that the employees should work in a relaxed office environment with no restriction on their clothes. This policy of work facilitates the outstanding performance of the whole staff.
On the other side, some professions should strictly follow the regulation of the dress code during their work. Police officers and firemen should wear their uniforms for their safety and also to be easily recognized. Health care staff should put on their unique clothing to be trusted. A patient ca not trust a physician who wears a T-shirt or jeans. School principals or politicians wear their formal attires as a sign of authority and responsibility. If a school principal does not wear his formal suit, he may affect the image of the school. In some work places, if the staff did not wear their uniforms, the customers will be disappointed. For example, at Walmart store, if I have a question, I would ask the staff who is wearing the unique T-shirt. If I did not see the T-shirts, I would leave from the store.
In conclusion, certain fields can be free to choose their own dresses, while others must follow the dress code.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, may, so, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1479.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89735099338 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6344404989 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.539735099338 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.8272822292 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8421052632 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8947368421 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52631578947 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297857017158 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968856715171 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0767759844562 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172170702698 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0610275044889 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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