Some people think that the government should offer financial support and care to old people, while others think that people should save money for their future life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In today's era, it is considered that financial assistance and care should offered by the regimes to the old while some don't think so but hold the view one is supposed to do some saving for the future. I will talk about them and show my idea.
For individual, official support means safer, more stable and reliable measure to the elderly when one's own saving encountering crisis resulted from lots of aspects such as financial depression and rubbery, which is undoubtedly devastating blow. On the basis of governmental aids, the old people will be under less pressure, caused by the poverty, children's reluctance of supporting and so on, which bring about more physically healthy bodies and relaxed emotion. In physical health, sufficient financial support leads to timely medical treatment while it prompts more reassured attitudes to life in mental health. For society, it may strengthen its cohesion with higher welfare, meaning secure guarantee, so the society will be more stable with a publicly conceiving government. As it mentioned, it will ultimately form a happier society.
Preparing money by oneself will relieve the governments' pressure compared to assistance and care provided by official regimes. Agreeing with the thoughts, individuals will be aware of the significance of plans and their life blueprints about what and how to do to live a more comfortable and reassured old age life, developing one's cognitive level of personal structure. Gradually, it will also performed a more energetic, vigorous and progressive atmosphere, with everyone no matter how old he or she is struggling for their life. Would it not become a boon?
As far as I am concerned, governmental assistance and care are radical for the elderly. A social condition with all progressive may sounds unrealistic, and honestly, it still needs a long time to reach. Nowadays, taking supportive operations are the best way for a more secure society, with the elderly relying on effective public medical and emotional care.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, honestly, if, may, so, still, then, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2600619195 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88945562181 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613003095975 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.2765983156 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.357142857 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219974531579 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0650944077653 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0754644046569 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137872776787 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751210253747 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.