Some people think that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, and the government and big companies can make a difference. To what extent you agree or disagree?
In today's heterogeneous world with lots of human's harmful active, the environment was put on top of the list because of its importance and emergency . Some people strongly argue that citizens is not useful for environmental improvement, so government and big companies came to be known as the most effective factors to lessen the pollution levels and minimize their impacts. I personally concur that both individuals and authority are curial parts for this phenomenon.
On the one hand, we can not deny the integral role of authorities and famous companies in the green revolution. obviously, competent authorities play a main role in environmental protection. By the way of introducing regulations and imposing pecuniary fines and other severe punishments, they can prevent and deter someone who deliberately causing harm for the surroundings. For example,Singapore, the cleanest city in the world, acquire its reputation as a result of harsh penalties with litterbugs.Moreover, the conservation of the environment should be considered by business as a part of cultural corporation . Instead of putting profit on top, they have to produce friendly goods with the environment and invest in advanced waste treatments with the conception that these actions pave the way for their sustainable development.
On the other hand, each person indispensable for the whole procedure of defending our nature against contamination. To show what i mean, on average, everyone discharges non-recyclable plastic products, on a daily basic , contributing for the death of marine features and make polluted our environment. should each person be conscious of and competent at curbing the amount of garbage dumped, the whole society can go green. On top of that, that is resident commuting habit which partly respond for air pollution and global warming. Especially, privacy motorized vehicles emit greenhouse gases such as CO2, SO2 and so on . Only when inhabitant's major modes of transportation are switched to public ones that can restrict the contamination out of the catastrophic levels.
In conclusion, both individuals and bureaucracy have their important role to cease the climate breakdown and even mass extinction for our planet. because of that, they have equal missions and need to put those plans into action immediately.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, moreover, so, for example, i mean, in conclusion, such as, as a result, by the way, on the other hand, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51675977654 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.29912097388 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628491620112 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 615.6 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3828700428 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.4375 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.625 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125472770368 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373719568389 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426802054989 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706090086308 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345637190116 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.98 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.