Through the ages leisure time was, is and will be playing the vital role and take noticeable place in humans' life. Consequently, some people think that spending free time on activities or hobbies that benefit their mind set is the best, while others state that it is more important to have psychological and mental rest. This essay will discuss both views and describe an opinion of the writer.
On the one hand, followers of the first statement are right in some extent. People, especially nowadays, spend most of their time on their work or study. Obviously, they do not have enough time to widen their horizons, expand their knowledge and improve their brainwork. To realise these ideas, people spend time reading books that contain a lot of useful information; listening to different scientific or other podcasts and interviews of researchers or scientists; learning playing chess or other games that could improve their mind; doing various puzzles and working out diverse jigsaws; reading phylosophical works that set forth the compound and deep thoughts or stories. Another reason of why people think so may be the case, when their occupation is completely related with their hobbies or when the job requires only physical strength.
But, conversely, upholders of the oppose opinion are right as well. At present days, in the majority of cases, labours are tightly related with mental work, thus based on this people think that this is an acceptable idea to spend the spare time on activities which can help to relax their brain. Especially if during the worktime humans do lots of mental work, having a rest is just necessary for their brains to recover. For example, they can listen to music, watch movies, chat with their family or friends, read books, but not in those large quantities. The brain can have a rest during physical activities too, therefore they can even dance, run, do some workouts, swim, play different games- whatever, or tidy up their apartments listening to music. All these activities, as mentioned earlier, can help to distract our brain from the daily routine of work and have a rest.
To conclude, from my point of view, I strongly believe that spending time on leisure activities is better, than doing that only on " really useful activities". But at the same time at least with some benefit for ourselves and our surrounding.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to play'.
Suggestion: to play
... of researchers or scientists; learning playing chess or other games that could improve...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ength. But, conversely, upholders of the oppose opinion are right as well. At present d...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...related with mental work, thus based on this people think that this is an acceptable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, conversely, first, if, may, really, so, therefore, thus, well, while, at least, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 395.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02784810127 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.45809453852 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56608723884 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567088607595 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.4131882271 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.125 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6875 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298825204873 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0913083429304 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0654021765319 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196959617304 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678248434848 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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