Some people think it is not necessary for adults to receive education in class. Self-study is a good way for them to study more effectively. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Attending a formal education plays an indispensable role among students. While some have strong view toward this opinion, others oppose that they should learn hard without the help of a teacher. Personally, the best answer for this question is the combination of tutoring at school and studying at home due to the following points.
On the one hand, self-study js an important factor helping students gain more knowledge. First and foremost, it is a great convenience than others as they can learn at anytime and anywhere through the Internet, especially, this studying method possibly limits the difficulties of far distance. Secondly, studying on the Internet alone gives them a large amount of information sources. Undoubtedly, the Internet is greater improvement than traditional library because you can find out a variety of available materials in any fields immediately. Students can even get updated knowledge from Internet, therefore, students are capable of getting many benefits from self-study.
On the other hand, students studying at school are at advantage compared with others who learn at home. To begin with, teachers can encourage their students to learn harder. To be specific, they keep them totally concentrated on lessons, which not only do tutors stimulate the spirit of learning among students but also help students have great breakthroughs. Next, students sometimes make mistakes during the studying process, so teachers are the ones to correct the wrong errors for them. In consequence, this choice is much better for pupils to study in class.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that after school, students need to spend more time doing their homework themselves so that this combination gives you best results you can gain
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1484.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28113879004 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79365097297 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633451957295 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7992288628 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.0 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.71428571429 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178891895011 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677730808739 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525977643648 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105872417122 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232023179083 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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