Some people think that the media should not report details of crimes to the public. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Explicit descriptions of crimes on media are sometimes left uncensored, and people are maintaining to ban it. While excessive exposure of the gruesome details would definitely leave a great mark of viewers, completely banning those detailed descriptions will be another story.
people often argue that viewing crime scenes implant a seed of crime in people, especially when it comes to immature teens. seeing images of horrible deeds might make other minor crimes seem less significant: stealing or simply beat others up seems trivial compared to rape and murder. unprotected from horrific crimes out there, people might subconsciously think that its theft is acceptable. we shouldn’t let crime reports arouse the darkest side of humanity which should be left concealed, out of sight. violence propagates violence, violence is born out of violence. seeing less violence would cause less violence. Moreover, some crimes are, crudely speaking, distortion of humanity, cause of bloodshed that are just too horrible to witness. Vivid pictures drained with blood, unlike brutality in movies which people understand is fictitious, would effectively drag viewers into the scene, leaving them terrified, or even causing them to develop symptoms similar to those of shell-shock. This should be prevented.
However, detailed description isn’t limited to blood and anguish. some crime details concerning fraud are quite educational, and act as a warning for those susceptible to it. understanding how those work would prevent people getting fooled by the same trick. people need a clear view of the society, and crime is simply a part of it. Deluded into believing that we live in the Garden of Eden, people will left themselves unprotected, and unprepared for the dangers out there.
To conclude, we should seek an intermediate between the two extremes. extremely disturbing content should be restricted to appear on TV, and helpful content should be allowed on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1665.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47697368421 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80178977968 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644736842105 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.571746234 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 15.0 3.9879759519 376% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216069288801 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653930249155 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406165766096 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120984619549 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0285075512207 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.