Some people think that music plays an important role in society. Others thinks it is simply a form of entertainment.
It is often argue whether music has a crucial place in society or it is only about entertainment. I think music is important because it gives us a hint of culture and history about a particular society. I will discuss both sides throughout this essay.
Music has been existed for a quite long time in almost all geographies. Since the tools and gadget are varies depend on region to region, insturaments for making music also shows diversity depends on avability of materials to make music in that specific place. Because of this reason by looking through the way of their making music would provide us with many crucial details on culture and history of former nations. For example, Folk music is existed in every countries with carrying different ryhtms and melodies inside of it. This is because, historical events and culture’s itself highly effected on the way people putting their emotions into their music.
On the other hand some people argue that music has no dephts rather than serving to people with sense of having fun. Nowadays, the way of making music is slightly the same in many different countries as many of them following nearly the same global trends. Concerts, shows, musicals give people a great number of options, however, in terms of representing cultures they are extermely weak. For example many people going out to bars and pubs to get relaxed and be entertained and usually these placeses offer their customers live music with local and sometimes nation-wide bands and singers whose only perform popular and trendy songs.
To conclude, although in recent years music being mainly related with entertainment due to the global trends and expressions, however I beileve music is tremendously important for nations since it is allow us to understand former nations’ history and culture.
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also, however, if, look, so, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1526.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57003242522 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.4767121649 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.384615385 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202865259951 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709750454675 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510165134658 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122644150085 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336668414464 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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