It is not argued that with nowaday's ever-changing world, the enhancement of living standards are always associated with the greater demand for self-relaxed. Beside to those terms, some people abuse it too much that can lead to serious impacts with societies, especially driving offenses. While many people resist that strictly stringent regulations are the only best choose for this issue, I totally side with those who think that other ways also can minimize the offenses on commuting .
On the one hand, the violation of traffic safety laws originated from several reasons.it can be the attributable to the abusement of the stimulant and drinking alcohol before driving.This always makes your mental and brain not conscious enough for driving during the road absolutely. This can bring it with many drawbacks and the major reason that lead to serious accidents, So it is obvious that the implementation of rules can change people's attitudes toward violating laws. This means that if a driver was punished when he breaks a rule, he will able to be responsible for the significance of behaviours, totally dependent on the level of those.After admitting about their actions or receiving pelnaties may also realise the downsides of violating the laws and they are unlikely to commit the same offence.
I hold fast to the belief that harsh punishments on driving illegally are not only the best solution, we can enhace the safety of our road. It is true that there are still effective measures to ensure people's safety, such as spreading important awareness about road safety through TV or online platforms. Furthermore, the equipment of technical facilities such as the alcohol's measurement machine or speeding.Also, the government may encourage residents in big cities to transport by buses or trains. Giving rise to those commutes, it can not only minimal the most effectively the risks of traffic congestion or traffic offenses but its convenience and acccessibility help protect the environments. the useful method may be to combine all the aforementioned ideas.
In conclusion, in my opinion, stricter regulations are not the only way but to be necessary in serving the proliferation of methods of transportation.And I think that measures including raising awareness and promoting the use of driving can also contribute to maintaining road safety.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1979.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 374.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29144385027 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3976220399 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04822979595 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 626.4 506.74238477 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.4170070004 49.4020404114 145% => OK
Chars per sentence: 164.916666667 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 20.7667163134 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197707485614 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703595325322 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624483165838 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120673712924 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394894045294 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.03 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.