Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is widely held belief that offspring should be though how to be a deserved member of society by their caregivers. But there are group of people who put forward an opinion that school should take this role. I am of the opinion that this matter should be debated in the light of several factors before any conclusion can be drawn.
First and foremost, fathom to society is the crucial matter for all teenagers, since it helps them avoid committing a crime and incur a dangerous to society. Moreover, parents, as they spend more time with their children is the main responsible people for upbringing. For example, well-wisher always should mention about harmful and useful matters during the family gathering time such as dinner or birthday party. Secondly, caregivers know their underage children’s character, behavior very well and they can nurture kids how to interact and respect society rules. Also, parents have more experience since maybe did some mistakes and achievements when they was a young. Therefore they are able to teach their children’s avoid prejudice to society and how to ameliorate human qualities remembering their yesteryear behaviors.
One the other hand, schools also has a huge impact to teenagers’ life since here pupils can hang out and discuss some common topics with their classmates. Undoubtedly, school is not just center of gaining education, also the place where juvenile learn teamwork and value others opinion, see eye to eye with people, scrutinize the society problem. For example, during the geography or biology circumstances they can acquire the education how to save flora and fauna, how to use water and natural resources properly.
To sum up, although there are a number of different points of view regarding this issue, I claim that parents have to be responsible their children’s upbringing and school should provide just an education. If two fronts keep a balance, every youth society member will be the best social person in the future.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: groups
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and achievements when they was a young. Therefore they are able to teach their children&a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19076923077 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76888202932 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627692307692 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2761891531 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.5 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2142857143 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.42857142857 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253745260706 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0830836862228 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0476218752836 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155992855251 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507263935991 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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