Some people think that parents should teach their children how to become good members of the society. School is a place to learn this. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Moral education should be the responsibility of every parents, learning institution is not the right place to acquire this. While I understand this claim, I would argue that moral virtue can still be learnt in schools
It is often argued that it is the sole responsibility of every parents to bring out the best in their wards in order for them to be good citizens. Proponents of this claim that every parents wants the best for their children, so they instill in them moral virtue such as honesty, responsibilities and respect for others. For example, every first child in a typical Nigerian family takes full responsibility of their younger ones once they graduates from school and have gotten a good job.
However, I tend to disagree that school should not be a place to learn good morals and there are convincing arguments for this. Firstly, the mission of schools has been to develop in the young ones both intellectual and moral virtues. This means that the teachers are capable in teaching both academic works and good behaviors. Admittedly, some children due to over-familiarity with their parents lacks manners. The school mould such child into becoming someone with societal value. Also, students mix with various race, personality culture and languages in their learning institution, this seems appears to help them cope and maintain good behaviors with such in the future. On the long run, schools still turn up to be the domain for moral education.
To sum up, I believe that school is the best place to learn how to become good citizens as they try to cope with diverse culture and maintaining a good stand from the scratch.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'graduate'
Suggestion: graduate
...ibility of their younger ones once they graduates from school and have gotten a good job....
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Line 9, column 424, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'moulds'.
Suggestion: moulds
...their parents lacks manners. The school mould such child into becoming someone with s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, so, still, while, for example, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94964028777 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67705178944 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546762589928 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.2160974541 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.666666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27269800772 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109170812945 0.084324248473 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0584796914944 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168193402681 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523772782283 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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