Some people think that paying taxes is their only responsibility towards society, while others feel that everyone should do more
Although certain individuals believe that their social role is limited to fulfillment of tax obligations, however, there is also another opinion suggesting that each citizen must be engaged to the community where he lives in order to contribute to the social development. From my perspective, living in society calls for a variety of actions by each person.
First, we should not forget about the environment that we live in. A tremendous growth in production and technologies bring new issues that need to be resolved. Despite the fact that advanced technologies provide for better life style, numerous side effects are inevitable. For example, pollution is affecting people’s health, causing allergic reactions. Statistical reports justify the importance of immediate and thorough consideration of our social responsibilities with regard to environmental safety. This includes not only the large-scale remedial actions implemented by the government and corporations, but also requires responsible individual approach in one’s day-to-day activities. An individual may ensure proper waste disposal, mindful care of water and other natural resources.
Another crucial aspect of social responsibility is the need to provide special care and support to the certain categories of citizens, like elderlies, disables or otherwise not capable of taking care of themselves. To a large extent their well-being depends on the governmental programs. Respective authorities must focus on this issue and develop an appropriate infrastructure for these people. And each person may also contribute by speaking up, acting ethically, raising questions, providing an individual support to these categories of people so that to improve the quality of their life.
In view of the above although it is undeniable that paying taxes is one of the crucial responsibilities of an individual, but I strongly believe that the social role of citizens includes various obligations to the community, such as demonstrating an ethical behavior, ensuring an environmental and health safety, protecting certain categories of people and much more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, for example, such as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.75555555556 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.251720478 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622222222222 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.1124106637 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129848978699 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373414926114 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.02646178741 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760177832407 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195724345875 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.42 12.4159519038 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.39 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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