Some people think sports games are important for society, while others believe they should be taken as leisure activities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
As sports have become prevalent in nowadays, there are many debatable perspectives related to whether sports should be seen as entertainment activities or a dispensable part of society. In my opinion, I advocate the point of view that sports should be treated fairly.
One of the most significant rationales explaining why many people do not take sports seriously is the fact that many athletes can not afford to live decently. To be more specific, the wages of athletes in many unpopular sports, such as swimming, archery, etc, are low in comparison with their counterparts in other ports, because of not having the attention of multi-medias. As a result, it misleads the majority of people to treat sport as relaxing activities instead consider it as a proper career. However, I think this will discourage sportsmen who gained pride for their countries in Olympic, putting great efforts into their careers. To some extent, many professional athletes would quit their jobs, therefore, it causes negative impacts on domestic sports fields, makes it hardly develop. According to a survey conducted, the main reason that many athletes abandoned their careers was disrespects from society.
However, some people also believe that sports play an essential role in society due to its inspirations. Sports prove human capacities through many fascinating achievements of sportsmen. By witnessing these incredible performances, viewers and audiences can believe in themselves, being inspired to do greater things. Besides, based on my experiences, sports also are the passions of many adolescents so that they want to take it into professional careers. In a sports article, journalists reported that many African American adolescents have been inspired by Micheal Jordan, a famous basketball player, to give up on crimes. For this reason, people should pay respect to their dreams by treating sports fairly.
In conclusion, sports are crucial for our society because it not only encourages people to aim high but also makes positive impacts on thoughts of youngsters.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
As sports have become prevalent in nowadays, there are many debatable perspectives ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1742.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39318885449 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93329234964 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606811145511 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4697507627 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.133333333 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5333333333 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232350191224 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811686880359 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0529192073132 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149007198936 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0465144655957 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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