Some people think that teachers should be responsible for teaching students to judge what is right and what is wrong so that they can behave well. Others say that teachers should only teach students academic subjects. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although most people are of an opinion that the main job of teachers is to educate the students academically, others feel that it is the duty of teachers to give information to students about what is good and what is bad.I agree with the later notion and believe that, the teachers should teach the children academic subjects as well as what is good for them.
First of all, the main working criteria of teachers is to teach daily syllabus and most people assume such. The other reason for this thinking is that, the other responsibilities of the kids should be taken up by parents. Secondly, some teachers may not teach good things to students. For example, teachers in Hong kong motivated their students to fight against central. this type of behaviour from teachers makes the opinion on teachers more worse.
On the other hand, some people argue that it is the sole responsibility of the teacher to nurture the kids for future benefits. As students spend most of their time in school, they learn most of the things by observing their teachers and follow them in their daily routine and some of the students get inspired from their favourite teacher and so it will definitely help them some where in the future.
To conclude, I believe that the teachers should not only teach subjects, but also should guide the students about what is good and what is bad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1136.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 238.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7731092437 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92775363542 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42554549647 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 176.041082164 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.495798319328 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 94.1381962861 49.4020404114 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.222222222 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4444444444 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46211534533 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.193054743396 0.084324248473 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.097618155383 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.308452756527 0.151304729494 204% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704482425511 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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