Today, the high sales of popular goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real need of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Most popular goods now make the sales high which illustrates the advertising power, not the society’s need that they are sold in. It is not only the advertisers have a strategic plan for advertisements but also requirements of customers enjoying the efficient usage of specific products, which was my opinion on this statement.
The first point I want to make is advertising has become so vibrant due to the effect of modern technology. We now live in the modern era and it is the most beneficial point for us to connect everyone and make money. If it hadn’t been for social platforms such as TikTok, Facebook, Instagram, how retail outlets would have reached such a tremendous sale for their goods? In addition, most people now love spending a little time browsing some social networking sites to watch something fun and they can’t avoid seeing an advertisement about gadgets, household equipment. Obviously, people can take a look at them and decide to buy it or not. However, those annoying advertisements will appear again somewhere.
Secondly, it can be denied that the high quality of products come from advertisements induce people to buy more for their need. It is evident that marketing experts are likely to do a research before they announce the company to produce or sign a contract with some supermarkets that intend to purchase their goods and sell them to buyers. For that, when a supermarket displays a shelf of latest products, people tend to flock in because of their interest as well as intention of buying. If it hadn’t been for the need to buy that, they wouldn’t have a glance at it. To this point, most people will argue that there’s no relation to customer’s favour to the efficiency of products. However, they are allowed to give a try on the latest products before buying it. According to their perspective, they make a decision of their own if it suits their taste or not. This attributes to the need of the society toward high sales of ubiquitous products.
In conclusion, manufacturers master the skill of planning the best strategy for a successful advertisement by applying the technological revolution’s achievements. Moreover, the customer’s need for the products make contribution to the high sale too. For that, the sales can be highly earned by these two factors.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 183, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...that marketing experts are likely to do a research before they announce the company to pro...
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Line 3, column 387, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
...at, when a supermarket displays a shelf of latest products, people tend to flock in becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1933.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 388.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98195876289 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94124790867 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55412371134 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 587.7 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6695950426 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.736842105 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4210526316 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42105263158 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214835021823 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0739321538374 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.09882291585 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157417506112 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0955428640859 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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