Today TV channels provide man s sport show more than women s sport show Why Should TV channel give equal time for women s sport and men s sport

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Today, TV channels provide man's sport show more than women's sport show. Why? Should TV channel give equal time for women's sport and men's sport?

These days, because many people are interested in men’s sporting so sport shows played by men are broadcasted more than that of women on TV channels. In my opinion, I strongly agree with the viewpoint that both of them should be paid equal attention.
There are two main reasons for prioritizing man’s sport shows on TV. Firstly, because the physical condition of men is better than its women, they are more suited to many sports that require physical strength such as football or hockey. It is clear that there is a greater number of man’s sport shows compare with women’s sport shows. Moreover, men’s sport shows help television station increase priority from advertising contracts because these shows absorb more views. Many surveys have shown that those who think male sport is more attractive make up the majority of the respondents. For instance,World Cup, which is one of the biggest sport events on the world and only for men’s soccer teams, attracts many audiences so TV network can earn large priority through broadcasting ads in this event.
However, TV channels should also spend more time on women’s sport because of some reasons. Firstly, if television stations continue to be biased toward men sport shows, it can lead to increase gender inequality. Besides, many women’s sports which good for women’s health are more and more popular, especially yoga, which they can practice at home through shows on TV to enhance their health daily. This will also help to significantly increase viewership for the TV station.
In conclusion, although there are many reasons for unbalanced time arrangement between sport shows for men and women, I still argue that TV networks should give equal opportunities for both of them. This will increasingly bring sports programs for women closer to audiences.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , World
...ajority of the respondents. For instance,World Cup, which is one of the biggest sport ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, still, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18918918919 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60765076161 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564189189189 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3333639211 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.714285714 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.594699822681 0.244688304435 243% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233967265654 0.084324248473 277% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.124719116649 0.0667982634062 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.402385762208 0.151304729494 266% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298817974578 0.056905535591 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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