In growing nations, foreign visitors are influenced and impressed with the culture and tradition of indigenous people, due to which native people are adapting foreign culture, and giving less importance to their traditional culture.
With an increasing influx of tourists in developing countries, local people are fascinated with western culture and forgetting their own traditions. They inculcate the luxurious lifestyle of foreigners and try to copy the same in their own lives. This results in overlooking the moral values of their forefathers and losing their own identity. In many villages of Rajasthan, In India, for example, people prefer to wear western clothes, and use the latest technology machines in their everyday lives, they hardly wear their traditional clothes and copy every new fashionable trend from western culture.
Apart from this, the result of paying less emphasis on culture by indigenous people has been reflected in a decline in tourism in such places. This is because, when local people, in remote areas of a country, adapt foreign culture in their day-to-day lives, it deters their cultural values, and tourists don’t find such places interesting to visit. Resultingly, these urban areas remain underdeveloped due to a lack of tourism. For example, the percentage of foreign visitors in the suburbs of India has been decreased substantially in the last 5 years, and this results in a decline in the economic growth of these rural areas.
In a nutshell, the increasing number of tourists from abroad has a detrimental effect on the cultural values of the native people. The local people inculcate the foreign lifestyle and give less importance to their own core cultural values.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, apart from, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34317343173 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77760526811 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516605166052 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0639430938 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.636363636 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6363636364 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130006296368 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572280000474 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550622146875 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097563992359 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409208960541 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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