University students must pay all tuition fees because it benefits mostly them individually rather than the society as a whole Do you agree or disagree

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University students must pay all tuition fees, because it benefits mostly them individually, rather than the society as a whole.
Do you agree or disagree?

It is a contentious issue among people whether the students should pay their tuition fees or not. It is indisputable that the economic progress of a country is dependent on graduate students. After completing graduation they give service to the welfare of the country and society. Therefore, for the betterment of academic careers, the government and society should bear their educational expenses. I completely disagree with the statement.

To begin with, for the social growth of the nation the government should give financial support to the university students such as giving money as loans at low interest for study purposes. As a result, in the future, they will be well professionals who will give service for the development of the country. In addition, it will help them to grow up with a sense of responsibility to the country and inspire them to work for prosperity. According to the survey of the BBC, the students who have financial support from the government do more social work such as arranging free medical treatment campaigns and helping the disabled person and so on. Moreover, they donate money to different governmental organizations for the well-being of the country.

Turning to the economic outgrowth, it is proved that the graduate students contribute tremendously to the economic progress of the country by inventing different types of materials or plant species. For example, a few years ago in Bangladesh, one of the agriculture graduate students invented a new type of rice genome that gives more rice than the others. It helps greatly to remove the food scarcity from the country. Furthermore, most of the big companies such as Google, Facebook want to graduate or postgraduate students as their employees. When students join those companies, they give a lot of revenue to the country which is beneficial for economic growth.

In conclusion, to sum up all the points above, the government should free the university educational cost so that the student can make a prospective career and contribute to social and economic progress.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1740.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19402985075 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96438201046 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.519402985075 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8639693435 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.75 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9375 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124505569035 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406253848029 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385123529342 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0777032268993 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160977142876 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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