The use of social media is replacing face to face interaction among many people in society. do you think the advantage outweigh the disadvantages.
In modern times, fast-paced introduction and development of mass media have always been the hottest issue that have direct and significant effects on our lives. Whether these online applications such as Facebook, Instagram, Skype and so forth may substitute for face-to-face communication, I find myself agreement that the benefits they bring overshadow the drawbacks.
One the one hand, it is undeniable that with the variety and availability of online platforms currently, an enormous number of people can access the internet easily for any purposes. People from all over the work are able to make friends and stay connected together any distances and update the latest information as well as exchange information at anytime and anywhere. For example, due to the outbreak of COVID-19, many people are expected to work from home via gadget modern like laptop or smart phones. Consequently, social networking sites play an important role in helping them connect and discuss together through online meeting room as usually daily communication. Besides, citizens in some places kept in quarantine for certain spans, it is more beneficial for them to use social media stay in touch with people surrounded and attend distance-courses which support them to assimilate knowledge. Moreover, despite long-distance, children studying abroad can keep in touch with their parents and loved ones such as their own buddies or relatives thanks to technological innovation.
On the other hand, as numerous upcoming online platforms are about to introduce, people have the tendency to reply on the virtual world. Hence, people are inclined to stay in their comfort zone rather than steeping out, socializing and learning new skill, especially social skills which need real interactions so as to have deeper insights their own capacity to do things. What is more dangerous is that people will be a lack of basic skill to survive and flourish under important circumstances like in a group discussion, job an interview and even team players, etc. furthermore, abusing social networking sites to interact with people can lead the downfall of communication in prolong time which make people hardy connect together in real situations.
In conclusion, social media can have detrimental impact on our society. however, I consider that their advantage would exceed the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1994.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41847826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93204381062 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614130434783 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.6826457786 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.428571429 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172596354555 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531616846041 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0350128758385 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0989506532224 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168751028481 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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