Visual pollution is the major cause of accidents on roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
Visual pollution is an aesthetic issue and refers to impact of pollution that impairs once ability to enjoy view. Are accidents on roads due to visual pollution? I agree upto a point but that's partly true, but there are number of behind some reasons.
The first step is to understand why this is happening. Broadly speaking, there are many reasons for this. The first and foremost is billboards. When any person hanged the billboards on the any side of the road because they are attracting the human towards the advertisement , and people also attracted the good billboards. Furhermore, this advertisement which is the cause of some accidents. Moreover, sometimes human can suffering an eye fatigue. For instance, 40 cars are damaged due to billboards in Australia because when one car's person to watching the one attractive news then, they stop their car, and other cars are damaged due to first car.
Apart from all that building who is made up of glass can reflect sunlight which is dangerous the people who drive this is also cause of pollution. However, masses loss their eye because which light coming from sun, and this light will be easily reflected from glasses , and directly attack on human eyes. So, eyes are suffering many different diseases like blind . In addition to, this is the cause of accidents.
Thus, it can be ascertained that is the debatable issue although, I believe that government should allow the strict rules for salesman then, they do not hang the any billboards on the side of road. Firstly, follow the instructions which are apply by government.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, then, thus, apart from, broadly speaking, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95864661654 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60584984622 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 397.8 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.8571400529 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.625 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0953193365994 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0387361636249 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650762383538 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0708038857563 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0803264778087 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.58 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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