When choosing a job, the salary is the most important consideration.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
financial compensation is a highly essential term that employers should consider before accepting a job. To a certain extent, I agree monthly payment is one of the reasons people working. However, I also believe that working in a safe environment is the most crucial consideration.
Plenty of reasons elucidate why wage plays an important role in terms of selecting a job. First of all, people work to meet their daily necessity such as to pay accommodations and household expenses. Therefore, well-paid jobs are required to ensure their <span style="color: rgb(0, 0, 0); font-family: Roboto, arial, sans-serif; font-size: 16px; white-space: nowrap;">prosperities</span>. Secondly, many families have a sole-money maker having responsibility for all the family members. In Indonesia for instance, almost all family members are economically dependent on the head of families. This makes those who responsible financially in the families ought to carry out the economically profitable job.
Nevertheless, many aspects are highly essential to be put into account before accepting a job. Firstly, people should regard the security of the workplace as it would extremely affect their safety. High-rise-window washers, for example, receive high salaries but this profession risk to cost their life. Secondly, people should think about whether the companies are the best place to develop themselves regarding their skills and to be a better individual. The workplace should be occupied by the people motivating each other, and having a possibility to achieve higher positions and reach their personal goals.
To sum up, I believe that monthly payment is an important factor that people should consider while performing a job since they have many responsibilities, however, the most important factors a worker should consider is their safety and self-development.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Financial
financial compensation is a highly essential term...
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Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a responsible'.
Suggestion: who is a responsible
... the head of families. This makes those who responsible financially in the families ought to ca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ry out the economically profitable job. Nevertheless, many aspects are highly es...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.71071428571 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.64789392692 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621428571429 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5257680392 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.6 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0957626948105 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0346309410449 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316994685197 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0665744170829 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031215839278 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.