Young people in the modern world seem to have more power and influence than any previous young generation.
Why is this the case?
What impact does this have on the relationship between old and young people?
In the developed world, the young generation has significantly affected society and their family. This essay will discuss some reasons leading to this and influence on the relationship between old and young people.
There are some reasons why young people have more power. Firstly, they have more knowledge than any previous young generation. Because they can access to the Internet so they can find any information they interest. Beside that, they have updated the news every day by using social networks. Moreover, the young generation is educated in a better environment, with professional teachers and modern equipment. Secondly, nowadays society gives young people chances so that they can express their opinion and thinking. Many organisations and the government willing to listen to them to improve the weakness.
Besides that, this situation also affects the relationship between the old and young generation. Firstly, in their family children and teenagers can communicate with their parents in a free way. They can share useful information they learn from the school, also they can contribute their opinion to solve problems their family have to face. Therefore, the relationship will become better and closer. The parents are seemed to be friends, which helps them educate their children more easily and conveniently. Secondly, in society young people do not feel fear when they talk to their teachers or their bosses. They can exchange the information also explain the difficulties to be supported, making the old generation more understand them.
In conclusion, in the modern world, the young generation has had more power and effect on society. Beside that, this impacts on the relationship between them and others.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39483394834 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72297721639 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.9527829884 49.4020404114 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2222222222 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376794370906 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139055013397 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.120317310984 0.0667982634062 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279977880426 0.151304729494 185% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0739629676992 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.39 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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