Since the 18th century technological advances have replaced people in the workplace. With today’s technology this process is happening at a greater rate. Technology is increasingly responsible for unemployment.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Recently lack of job vacancies has been directly related to the enhancement in the technology field. This issue started many years ago and is still growing those days. While, it is true that there is a direct link between unemployment and technological improvement, I believe that human touch should be always present in many areas like education and health.
In the first hand, we all agree that technology have improved many processes at work. When we use machines we will reduce the human errors and as a result we will increase the productivity. In fact, equipment is able to work twenty four hours over seven days which is not applicable with people that need to rest in order to recharge their energy. In addition, one machine is able to replace several persons so this will affect the company in a positive way since it will reduce the amount of wages paid at the end of each month. For instance, an industry of chocolate can launch thousands of this product with minimal persons intervention.
On the other hand, although machine is error free as already mentioned earlier and can lead to dramatic increase in company inputs. We should not forget that human touch is still a most for a lot of jobs to be accomplished .If we take the example of the education field , although we are recently hearing about robots doing teacher 's job, but sill they can't know if the audience has clearly understand the information. Furthermore, all jobs related to health sector especially those that deal with mental disorders. In this case the presence of human is crucial since they will be able to get the feelings of the ill person.
To sum up, although the unemployment rate has been dramatically increased because of the advances in technology. Some fields still need the presence of human touch in order to be done.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...persons so this will affect the company in a positive way since it will reduce the amount of wage...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
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...le of the education field , although we are recently hearing about robots doing teacher s job, but s...
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Suggestion: understood
...y cant know if the audience has clearly understand the information. Furthermore, all jobs ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, still, while, for instance, in addition, in fact, as a result, it is true, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1528.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86624203822 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62447729622 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.690396192 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.142857143 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157570861032 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550468419242 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0484150735117 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889324656671 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039784042642 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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