All education (primary, secondary and further education) should be free to all people and paid and managed by the government.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Education opens the doors of growth and prosperity for an individual. Some people argue that education should be made free of cost for all people of society irrespective of their economic backgrounds. As per my perspective, I am against this assertion and believe that education should be made free for weaker sections only.
The first argument in support of my opinion is it will help in achieving better literacy rates among the backward classes. Consequently, leading to their economic upliftment and providing their better standard of living. For instance, many people in poor and developing countries cannot afford education because they barely support their livelihood. Therefore, government can allocate money accumulated through taxes to give free education to them, which can help in relieving them from the clutches of poverty.
The second explanation in favor is it can help in the growth and prosperity of the nation. To cite an example, the growth of a country in measured in terms of economic background of people, their standard of living and the literacy rate. By educating poor people the government can easily achieve these desired goals. Moreover, education can help these people to incorporate healthier lifestyle and thus mitigating the deleterious effects of communicable diseases. These are spread because of unhygienic environment maintained by these people.
Lastly, the problem of population explosion can only be dealt with promoting education among financially weak people. For example, it has been found that the success rate of population control measures is more in educated societies as compared to uneducated ones.
To put it in a nutshell, education is utmost important and is the right of every individual, but the government should only provide aid to those people who cannot afford it. This will also reduce the enormous financial expenditure of supporting the entire population as well.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, lastly, moreover, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3940397351 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87928140202 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562913907285 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0779586034 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.8125 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222835784736 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732984596559 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721446015864 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129170588156 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0775107999274 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.