All societies have their own music and art. In what way are music and art important for society and for the individual?
Art and cultural diversity spread across nations is a major source of affection and togetherness among the people in this busy world and in this hectic work schedule for everyone. Every nation have their own and unique art and music. Their traditional culture makes their society unique and a source of pride for the members of the society.
Art, culture and music demonstrates the living style of the society. It also dictates the rich heritage and hefty amount of patronage possessed by the members of the society. However, music used to source of relaxation for patrons, such art and culture takes us back to the memories of time, where love affection used to prevail and there was hardly a scope for money with in such relationships. As a source of common heritage, it unites people. Every year, lot of tourists visits abundance of places in search of such uniqueness. Indeed, it serves a source of income for those parts of such art and music. Lot of people like to collect rare pieces of such culture to enrich their collection.
In spite of being advantageous to some people as a source of income by selling these to tourists, art and music does have some healing impacts of its own. Diversity in cultures brings and differentiation in their music from classical, traditional, folk and fast pace music. Without such art and music, people will not be able to understand the culture and may end up eaten by current rat race technological advancements.
To concluded, art and culture is soul of the society. By preserving its rich heritage, people gets benefited in morally, culturally and commercially.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1346.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9304029304 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73828573216 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531135531136 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0915793045 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.7333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.6 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332412061143 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120467177428 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100564020158 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200144726928 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0945453603798 0.056905535591 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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