Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree ?
people tend to spend most of the day at work and everyone expects their time at work place to be productive. While some people seem to prefer the sheer return they get in monetary terms from their work engagements over any other privileges, others look for the deeper satisfaction that good work ambience and fringe benefits can bring to their life. I strongly believe that although salary is an element to be considered, it is only the later that provides us fulfillment and job gratification.
To start with, standard remuneration for a job is often more or less the same if we decide to work in a similar capacity for different organizations. However, our payment can be more if risks and uncertainties borne during performance of our duties is considerably high for a particular assignment. salary is to be considered only as much as our minimum expectations because if the policy of an employer allows for a higher wage to the employees, there are other benefits that get curtailed. A temporary placement on a project financed by donor agencies such as the World bank and the Asian development bank, even though lucrative is less likely to fulfill our job satisfaction needs. salary should not therefore be allowed to act as an allurement.
Moreover, it is exposure to enhanced job experience and other perks of an employment that provides us with true life enrichment. there are many companies which people like to join because of the motivation they get from a good work environment, fair treatment of the employees, medical insurance for themselves and their family and numerous extra benefits apart from the monthly pay. The private sector in the developed countries have particularly grown due to the better privileges their employees get from work. On the other hand, the government positions in the developing countries are seen as more attractive due to the schemes such as pension and loan for education as compared to the private sector which has little concern for even basic facilities of transportaion and accomodation.
In summary, salary can buy us things but not a long-term happiness. we can work with a nominal salary and live joyfully given our emotional and psychological needs are met.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, apart from, in summary, such as, more or less, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 8.3376753507 276% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0352303523 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93328355895 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563685636856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 594.9 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.9376689457 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.714285714 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3571428571 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0850825367446 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0355119362256 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.026926007298 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0550619060924 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0287916734134 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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