Both poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult.
Do you agree or disagree?
The Pursuing of tertiary education has become a daunting task for many students irrespective of their financial status either poor or rich. However, I completely agree with the statement because of soaring international student placement, and strict admission criteria could be the most viable reason behind this burgeoning fact.
To embark with, most universities around the globe have devised tough rules and regulations regarding admissions. In other words, students with strong academic background, and higher percentages in their previous degrees are allowed to get admission, which eventually increased the competition among students by leaps and bounds. For example, recent report published in the Daily Times revealed that after 2015, monetary status has negligible effect on a student's academic career due to the revised policies of the top-ranked universities.
What is more, universities are inviting more students for other countries, to get quality education leaving their deserving students far behind. Fee for international students is double as compared to the local community, so they are prioritized. In addition, these students use college accommodation, transports, and other facilities which bring more business to the organization. For instance, at the University of California, MBBS degree is offered to national students for $1200 per year, while overseas students paid $2500 per year which makes a huge difference.
In conclusion, local students, whether they are rich or poor are being neglected by the university officials because they are accepting brilliant students to produce a quality education, and increased quota for students from abroad to get more profit.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77380952381 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98531933288 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3404790653 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 145.5 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0663298261491 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0296251251012 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302437590727 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0512622681243 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291980523145 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.18 50.2224549098 58% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.48 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.27 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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