Both poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult.
Do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal">The Pursuing of tertiary education has become a daunting
task for many students irrespective of their financial status. However, I
completely agree with the statement because of soaring international student
placement, and strict admission criteria could be the most viable reason behind
this burgeoning fact.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">To embark with, most universities around the globe have
devised tough rules and regulations regarding admissions. In other words,
students with a strong academic background, and higher percentages in their
previous degrees are allowed to get admission, which eventually increased the competition
among students by leaps and bounds. For example, recent report published in the
Daily Times revealed that after 2015, monetary status has negligible effect on
a student's academic career due to the revised policies of the top-ranked
universities. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">What is more, universities are inviting more students for
other countries, to get quality education leaving their deserving students far
behind. Fee for international students is double as compared to the local
community, so they are prioritized. In addition, these students use college accommodation,
transports, and other facilities which bring more business to the organization.
For instance, at the University of California, MBBS degree is offered to
national students for $1200 per year, while overseas students paid $2500 per
year which makes a huge difference. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal">In conclusion, university officials are neglecting local
students, whether they are rich or poor because they accept brilliant students to
produce quality education, and increased the quota for students from abroad to
get more profit.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.70119521912 5.12529762239 131% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.58670432249 2.80592935109 163% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.665338645418 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2553885611 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 186.888888889 106.682146367 175% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1111111111 7.06120827912 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 25.0 4.38176352705 571% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0473118740515 0.244688304435 19% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0199105216274 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262800744756 0.0667982634062 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.013132639329 0.151304729494 9% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0249097258238 0.056905535591 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.1 13.0946893788 184% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 21.88 12.4159519038 176% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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