Some people believe that women should stay at home and should take care of children, while others believe that women should work.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Women are considered as the backbone of society since they play an important role in domestic and work-related affairs. It is often argued by some that females should devote themselves to household chores, and upbringing of their progeny. Meanwhile, others are of the view that ladies should pursue careers. This essay will discuss both sides of the argument before reaching a logical opinion.
On the one hand, the supporters of the view that women should join the workforce in the outer world argue that the development of a nation is linked with the role of females in society because they are almost half of the population of the world. Moreover, women share fifty percent quota in every field of life whether it is education, health, old-age benefit programs so their contribution to the development of the country must be remarkable. For instance, Japan is the most rapidly developing country because it is mandatory for a university graduate female to do a part-time or full-time job for a specific period of time.
On the other hand, women should look after their children rather than giving them in custody of a babysitter where they are abused in their absence during working hours. This is to say that many nannies are ignorant in discharging their duties such as they give children sedatives so that they sleep for longer duration in order not to get poked by children again and again, which affects the child’s health. For example, a report published by the Health Society of the USA, which argues that offsprings of working women are more prone to physical illnesses due to the negligence of caretakers. Therefore, the focus of a female should be at home and towards children.
However, I believe that females should take care of their children as well as they can also work part-time. In this way, they can groom their young ones and also benefit society from their education and talent.
To sum-up, women should spend time with their families and also adopt a career depending on the availability of time to contribute to both the family and society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 612, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97720797721 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5764029121 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558404558405 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.126962075 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.785714286 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0714285714 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27925598475 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106135808806 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761526279776 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154964558032 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569516883761 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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