The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries

Essay topics:

The breakthroughs in medical science are by far the most significant advances in world society over the last two centuries.

Over the last hundred years, medical science changed in the way that cure of disease becomes very easy where everyone gets benefits. The pharmaceutical industry revolutionized all over that word that becomes a blessing for a world that can be argued.

Since the last decade, the way technology changed not only affects normal life but also enhanced life, and the way people live. Automation, Artificial Intelligence, and innovation provided more technology that helps medical science in their research. For instance, before 100 years ago, there was no possibility to survive if someone affected by cancer but today its cured by the latest technology.

In addition to this, there has been a vast change in the way of surgery because of the advancement of medical equipment that is available very easily. Today everyone having access to the vaccine, medical treatment and medicinal become one of the easiest for poor people as well. In the early years, when cancer, HIV AIDS was become one of the biggest threats to humanity but is handled by the medical science, and today the ratio of this disease reduces much. For example, IBM developed Watson that has been used by doctors to solve critical medical cases.

In conclusion, world society blessed by the medical science that is giving new hope to the world and individual, and everyone got benefit from this not only personal level but also as a whole society.

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Average: 7.7 (4 votes)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04255319149 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57812646697 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591489361702 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.2225939985 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.5 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189490948221 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722635706179 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0524186987855 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120896548306 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491523620047 0.056905535591 86% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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