In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with
other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes
the government has to pay for this care.
Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from
your own knowledge or experience.
Certainly the question of who should pay for the old people expenses is one of the most heated issue, the UK government is witnessing at the moment. I strongly believe that it is the responsibility of the government to not only bear the expenses of the senior citizens but also take better care of their needs.
Firstly, Rise in inflation in the economy has increased the prices of goods and services which has make it next to impossible for old age citizens to buy products to fulfill their daily needs. Furthermore, It leads them to do some cost cutting on the essential items, for example cod liver sea oil is rich in protein and are being used daily by old people.
Secondly, Medicinal services has become inevitably more expensive and unreachable from the hands of the poor people because of the exorbitant prices being charged by the hospitals and medical institutes. That is the reason, you may find a big queue outside the government hospital where doctors are less and patient are more.
However, the family should not throw the luggage of their family members at the mercy of the government hands. They should cover their monthly expenses as much as possible by providing them a fixed monthly income to meet their needs.
To sum up, I think that the onus of senior citizens should be taken care by the government because it is not only their duty to give them the financial support but also take better care of their desires and want.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, for example, i think, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73622047244 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47338426761 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 378.0 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.4268503877 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.666666667 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.2222222222 20.7667163134 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255309422903 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100893610374 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599247750453 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131909022943 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541357076353 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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