In the last three decades, an unprecedented rise in car ownership has been observed in several cities around the world. That is consequently accruing traffic congestion. This is certainly a major concern of the present time, however, there is a number of a possible solution that should be taken under consideration to mitigate the use of the personal car.
To start with, there are various reasons behind the growing number of private cars in the cities all around the world, perhaps commuting is the most obvious reason, masses are buying it to move to efficiently inside the city for numerous purposes such as to visit their workplace, for shopping etc. Secondly, nowadays a new trend is running in the society that having a car means better recognition in the society, in addition, nowadays car companies are providing equated monthly instalment based purchase which helping buyers to purchase more cars because customers pay in instalments that do not put more burden on them. Lastly, dissatisfaction with public transport service is leading them to purchase more personal cars, for example, a car manufacturing company Toyota had conducted a survey where they asked customers to reasons behind buying cars, nearly 56% of customers blamed inefficient and inconvenient public transport service has led them to private cars.
On the other hand, there are various ways by which authorities can curb this problem such as by providing improved public transport. The government has to make improvements in public transport service such as more spacious seats as well as more focus on internal cleaning of the bus this would surely lure people to use them for commuting. Furthermore, legislation ought to make separate cycling path which will not only encourage people to use their cycles for commuting but also diminish the congestion as well as pollution from the cities, to exemplify, a Chandigarh news agency the tribune had published since the cycling paths have been built the traffic problem has been considerably decreased as well as the air quality is far better than in past few years.
In conclusion, the growing number of the car has become a colossal problem for the various cities of the world, however, there are few measures such as improvement in public transports service and usage of the cycle for commuting can diminish traffic congestion.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to start with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1985.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 384.0 315.596192385 122% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16927083333 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4267276788 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75836082053 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541666666667 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 110.951385751 49.4020404114 225% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 198.5 106.682146367 186% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.8 7.06120827912 266% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142722094505 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0658598915232 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336476752311 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100828852121 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0293868811627 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.0946893788 169% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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