Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion?
Nowadays it is considered by some people that being a university graduate is a key to getting a good job, while there are others who think that it is better to have work experience and interpersonal skills. I believe that having academic qualification is essential for the job, however soft skills and experience also plays a significant role in the future.
To begin with, many thinks that it is easier for people to find a good job if they are university graduates with a good degree. This is because big tech companies often look for people who have better academic qualifications and tend to filter out unqualified candidates during the screening process itself. In addition, employers feel that they should have prior knowledge of the subject matter before they join their workforce. For example, many software giants such as Google, Amazon and Microsoft recruit only IT and computer science graduates who can solve their latest business problems. This is true as qualified professionals can think of multitude ways to solve a problem.
On the other hand, some people say that practical experience and soft skills are vital for getting a good job because they can handle a job better than a fresher graduate. They might have faced similar challenges in the past and hence they know how to tackle them. Furthermore, there are a few jobs, which require a good interaction with people. These jobs require candidates who have good communication skills and are able to socialize with others. For instance, in marketing sector companies the recruit employees can communicate effectively in front of their clients.
To conclude, according to my opinion getting a good job requires a relevant background either in experience or in education depending on the type of work and field, people should make sure they attain the necessary skills or degree before applying for a job in order to get success.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06349206349 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76482968639 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.3186957691 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.692307692 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5384615385 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263190817129 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0954608383799 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107369091874 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188442474195 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0734377902746 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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