You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.Write to the airline and explain what happened?Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it?Find out what they are going to do about

Essay topics:

You travelled by plane last week and your suitcase was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company.
Write to the airline and explain what happened?
Describe your suitcase and tell them what was in it?
Find out what they are going to do about it?

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to inquire about my suitcase. It was lost while I was travelling on a flight A-220 of your airline company. This incident happened last Saturday when I was travelling from Chicago to New York. Before boarding the flight, I had deposited my suitcase at the luggage counter. However, upon landing at the destination airport, I was not able to find my suitcase. I searched for almost an hour but could not locate it. I then registered the complaint (Id# 12437) with the customer care unit. But still I have not heard anything about it.

The suitcase that I lost was black in color with the tag name American tourist on the front side. It is a medium size suitcase and made of pure leather. It contains some important documents, clothes and a few gift items.

As it has been more than a week now. I am getting bit impatient and anxious. I hope you will inform me the update of the suitcase at your earliest and sent it to my office address once found.

Thank you for your time and support.

Yours sincerely
XYZ

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to inquire abou...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...ate it. I then registered the complaint Id# 12437 with the customer care unit. But...
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Line 4, column 30, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: black
...out it. The suitcase that I lost was black in color with the tag name American tourist on t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57068062827 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44881820813 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670157068063 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.8056891741 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 54.5625 76.5299724578 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.9375 16.8248392259 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293929660502 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793842996472 0.0766984524023 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773058103368 0.0603063233224 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143570590368 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532771003351 0.0580467560999 92% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.34 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.