Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years?
How can these problems be overcome?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Issues related to the environment, population and education will in the near future become a major concern all over the world. India is no exception to this, considering the ever-growing population and the resultant challenges that come with it. This essay will discuss the problems that India will face with regards to the said issues and how these can be mitigated.
India’s population is only marginally lesser than China’s, which is the most populous country in the world. Over population results in additional pressure on the limited resources of the country consequently adversely affecting the environment as well. For e.g. Delhi, which is the capital of India, has such high amounts of Air Pollution that it is declared unfit to live in. This is due to the large number of vehicles that the residents use to ply in every day. Additionally, India also has a high birth rate which means that there is an increasing demand for affordable educational facilities. Unfortunately, the country is unable to meet this need, leading to many people being deprived of quality education. More than 50% of the people in India are Non-literate.
To overcome these challenges, first the government should encourage its citizens, through effective policies and schemes, to limit the number of children that they have. Secondly, environmental friendly alternatives should be sought for human activities that are harmful to the environment. For example, a few car manufacturing companies have introduced Electric cars that can be an effective substitute to vehicles that run on fuel. Thirdly, free and quality education for all needs to be on top of the state’s priority, because a population that is aware would be more conscious and a responsible one.
I would like to close by saying that, though population explosion, environmental degradation and lack of education opportunities are real issues that everybody may face in the coming times, there are ways in which they can be brought under controlled or at least their effects be reduced. It would take dedicated and persistent efforts on the part of the authorities at large and the community as a whole.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, e.g., first, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, at least, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1833.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23714285714 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02985956433 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577142857143 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1519405113 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.5625 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.875 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306955476537 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855882179619 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0750403295759 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172883237214 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643062519351 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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