The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
Do you agree or disagree?
Due to advancement of sophisticated technology, severe crimes are being decrease now because of the high surveillance. While I believe there has been improvement in preventing crimes, I disagree with the statement and think that technology has increased the crime rate more advance and at global level.
Crime committer stays aware when they are doing any offense. In other words, individual who commit crime will look around if there is any technological surveillance. Thieves will think before doing anything wrong. Therefore, this technological advancement made people more relaxed despite of having high stress about threats.
On the contrary, there has been increase in crime even though world has revolutionised with technology. First and foremost, with the arrival of internet and digital currency, cyber crimes have increased rapidly. This is because senior people are not aware about new technology and eventually, they will fall into the trap of cyber frauds. Consequently, They loose large amount of wealth due to unawareness about functionality.
In addition, physical violences and sexual harassment has been increased due to globalisation. To explain that human can easily watch the activity happening around the world on the mobiles and internet. When they see these violences and vandalism over the technology, they will try to take advantage of situation and start doing crimes in their countries. Moreover, this not only affect some people, but it turns into riot around the nation which is not better influence on society. Therefore, these technological improvements have not mitigated the rate of crimes.
In conclusion, to reiterate that there are several solutions found to alleviate the crime rates. However, this development has increased the crimes at global level. Needless to say, I believe if government implement better regulation and awareness about these technologies, it will prevent severe crimes.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, in addition, in conclusion, in other words, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94321631276 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562711864407 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9869282715 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.7777777778 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3888888889 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268562463829 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810727168133 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539371955176 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159516943287 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0742718718746 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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