The crime rate nowadays is decreasing due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime. Do you agree or disagree?
With the emergence of new technologies, a plethora of benefits have been made available to the public, particularly declined numbers of crime in society. I completely agree that technological advancements are the reason for alleviated crime rates. In this essay, I shall refer to some general examples to discuss the role of technology in avoiding and solving various crimes.
To begin with, the internet as well as the growth of journalism provided mankind, throughout the world, with the information on several proactive measures that could help prevent crimes such as robbery, theft, and murders. In other words, people nowadays are more aware of new technologies because of news, media, and the internet. For example, a survey executed by Crime Investigation Department shows that using their knowledge, acquired from various online(authentic) sources, more than 50% of the common public have installed smart locks and face recognition lockers in their shops as well as homes. Therefore, decreasing the probability of robbery or theft.
Furthermore, in case, a crime happens either because of the lack of safety or negligence of a person, numerous gadgets and technologies have made it much easier to solve the crimes than the pre-internet era. To exemplify, CCTV installation at the markets and residential areas have proved to help resolve a vast array of cases. In addition to this, GPS tracking, mobile phone tracking as well as call tracing, forensic science are the widely used technologies to find and arrest the criminals, who attempt either premeditated or unpremeditated crimes.
To conclude, it is incontrovertible that advances in science and technology are not only advantageous in preventing criminality but also helps in solving crimes, which would have been difficult otherwise. In the future, further contributions in this area would make this world a harmonious and safe place to survive.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1619.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41471571906 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09495588265 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632107023411 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.3161741088 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.916666667 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9166666667 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233966162922 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821490679233 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711324093942 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135562492182 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363539544542 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.37 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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