The development of tourism contributes to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globallyWhat are the advantages and disadvantages to having one langua

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The development of tourism contributes to English becoming the most prominent language in the world. Some people think this will lead to English becoming the only language to be spoken globally
What are the advantages and disadvantages to having one language in the world?

English is widely used spoken language across the globe as a result of increasing tourism, therefore, it is argued by some people that English would be the only spoken language in the world. The essay will first discuss the principal advantage of simplified communication and then mention the disadvantage of losing cultural identities as a result of this.

To begin with, the communication problems in the world would be solved if everyone speaks one language. At present, language is the biggest barrier which restricts people from education, business expansion, and sharing knowledge. If everyone spoke the same language then people will have advantage to pursue the best education in another country or to expand local business to international level. As a result, growing trade between nations and availability of skilled workforce would boost world economy. Moreover, multinational people would unite is a stronger ways as having only one language to communicate would enable them to share ideas and knowledge easily, this would make them more companionable and welcoming.

On the other hand, a language is not just set of words and means of communication, in fact, it is a unique for the specific culture. Language has evolved over thousands of years to establish its identity, therefore, many countries are still named after the languages that are commonly practiced. For instance, a country of French-speaking people is France. Language has enabled to preserve the rich history and traditions of people from difference races and religion. It would be disrespectful and unfair to consider people giving up native languages to simplify global communication.

In conclusion, English has become extremely popular language because of growth in tourism, if it becomes the only language to communicate then world economy will have healthy benefits whereas dying of other languages may adversely affect other cultures.

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Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, still, then, therefore, whereas, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1632.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45819397993 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95812544468 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581939799331 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1254048664 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.538461538 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2307692308 7.06120827912 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.389905700186 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123503190711 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100817715474 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252032744787 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875898645485 0.056905535591 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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