The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that the increasing numbers of obese citizens are keeping the hospitals busier than ever before to treat their medical problems. Many people believe that implementing additional sport classes in the primary education is an excellent solution to this problem. This essay completely agrees with the idea of adding further sport courses in academics to keep students fit and healthy from childhood. The essay will discuss firstly, how students get benefitted from sports and then, address the necessity of promoting healthy life style.
To begin with, Sport activities in the school are extremely essential for the overall development of children, therefore, many schools are hiring professional athletes to educate sports. Training under professional coach ensures students are motivated and engaged in games. As a result of this, they build stamina and endurance, it helps to maintain healthy body weight which will help them wards off diseases associated with obesity. For example, a survey from The Times reported that people engaged in intensive sports since school days tend to have lower risk of heart related diseases.
The current generation is in dire need of maintaining healthy life style as most of the work nowadays is a desk job, which involves sitting in front of computers for hours. The lack of physical movement or walking at work places is the main reason associated with gaining weight, thus, it is important to do at least 30 minutes of exercise such as walking, running, or cycling. Considering side effects of this working culture, many organizations around the world are encouraging employees to use bicycle to commute to the work. This is certainly a positive a way of improving public health
In conclusion, to solve the problem of large number of obese population and their health treatments, it is recommended for the future generation to have more sports classes and exercising activities in their schools to remain fit and healthy in life.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, therefore, thus, at least, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24451410658 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70791240175 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611285266458 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7485787926 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.416666667 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147268413816 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489422676167 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047598661531 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847412442438 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0101393721318 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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