Differences between countries become less evident each year. Nowadays, all over the world, people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and TV channels. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this?
With an advent of globalization, people acquire the similar preferences and demands which is minimizing the variability among echelons, ubiquitously. Although some people may be unaware of their own cultural roots, it does not mean that they can not gain significant exposure to the outside world while connecting with other people. In my opinion, the nations certainly have less contradictions among each other and people are far better off having experiences of the world all over.
The greatest benefit of sharing the identical choices such as food, clothing, promotion etcetera has made the world a global village. This has not only brought cohorts together, but also a feeling of distinction when they are offered similar commodities. Take McDonalds for example, where people relish the similar food quality globally as that can be enjoyed by them in every corner of the globe. Besides food and beverages, masses also have an opportunity to possess the popular clothing brands and the trending styles due to globalization. Owing to this, a stronger bond can be observed among people no matter where they are from. Therefore, differences among nations is curtailing and this is quite helpful in maintaining world peace.
On the other hand, the main challenge that some inhabitants might face could be obliviousness of their own roots and culture. With the aggressive spread of market economies and communication technologies, local cultures and values are in peril. This is because the west has made an effort to undermine their cultural heritage by imposing their religion and policies. For example, the true identity and culture of South Korea are in jeopardy with the influence of alien cultures. Thus, new generations care less about their history and tradition and more about machine-centric life.
To conclude, it is cogent from the above mentioned information that the benefits of globalization outmatch the drawbacks in the sense of bringing different races together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, may, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1678.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36102236422 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89081773199 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623003194888 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8163028852 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.866666667 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8666666667 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121248334202 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0381746784235 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376068510673 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0652830134369 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04211919343 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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